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Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Old Ma’s words hung in the air like frost. The taxi idled at the river’s edge, headlights cutting through the silver mist that rolled off the backward-flowing water. Wang Hui’s hand was on the door handle, but she hadn’t opened it. Her knuckles were white.

“You said he’s waiting for me,” she whispered. “The one who crossed before you. What does that mean?”

Old Ma killed the engine. The sudden silence was deafening—no crickets, no distant traffic, no wind. Just the soft, impossible sound of water flowing uphill, defying every law he’d ever learned.

“It means the river collects debts,” he said. “Every driver who crosses owes something. I owe him. He’s been waiting a long time for me to bring someone new.”

Wang Hui’s face went pale. “You’re trading me? My life for—for what? Your freedom?”

“No.” Old Ma’s voice was sharp. “I’m giving you a chance. The bridge you remember—the one you died on—it’s not the same bridge anymore. He rebuilt it. He’s been rebuilding it for thirty years, stone by stone, waiting for the right passenger.”

“Why me?”

Old Ma looked at the river. The dark shape moved beneath the surface—slow, patient, circling. “Because you saw him. The man with the white teeth. You pointed him toward the water. That made you his. He’s been collecting you ever since.”

Wang Hui’s breath caught. “I didn’t know. I was just trying to help.”

“That’s how he gets you. He never forces anyone. He just asks for directions, and you give them. Then he follows you home.” Old Ma reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a photograph—creased, faded, the edges worn soft. He handed it to her. “That’s the man I used to be. Before I became the driver.”

The photograph showed a younger Old Ma—maybe thirty, smiling, arm around a woman with kind eyes. Behind them, a river. The same river. Wang Hui looked from the photo to Old Ma, then back.

“You crossed,” she said slowly. “You crossed the river. And he let you?”

“He didn’t let me. He made me a deal. I drive the Spirit Taxi for thirty years, bring him the souls he points me toward, and he gives me back the woman in that photo. My wife.”

“Did he keep his promise?”

Old Ma’s jaw tightened. “She’s alive. She’s been alive this whole time, waiting for me. But I haven’t been able to find her. Every time I think I’m close, the road changes. The city changes. I’ve been driving in circles for three decades, trying to get home.”

Wang Hui looked at the photograph again. The woman’s eyes—there was something wrong with them. Too flat. Too dark. Like windows into an empty room.

“She’s not real,” Wang Hui said softly. “Is she?”

Old Ma flinched like she’d struck him. “What?”

“The photo. Look at her eyes. She’s not looking at you. She’s looking at something behind you. And the reflection in the river behind her—there’s no one standing there. But there’s a shadow.”

Old Ma snatched the photo back. He stared at it, his weathered hands trembling slightly. For thirty years, he’d memorized every detail of that image. The curve of her smile. The way the light caught her hair. He’d never noticed the shadow.

Because it hadn’t been there before.

The shadow was growing. Spreading across the photograph like ink through water. Taking shape. A tall figure. Thin. The suggestion of a hat.

Wang Hui gasped. “He’s in the photo. He’s always been in the photo.”

The river surged—a violent, unnatural pulse that made the taxi rock on its wheels. The dark shape beneath the water rose. Old Ma saw it clearly now: a face, ancient and terrible, with too-white teeth arranged in a smile that had no warmth in it.

“DRIVER,” the voice came from everywhere and nowhere, vibrating through the metal of the taxi, through Old Ma’s bones. “YOU’VE BROUGHT ME A CLEVER ONE. I LIKE CLEVER ONES.”

Wang Hui pressed herself against the passenger door. “He can talk? He can talk to us?”

“He can always talk,” Old Ma muttered. “He just usually waits until you’re on the bridge.”

The face in the water tilted. The eyes—if they could be called eyes—fixed on Wang Hui with an intensity that made her shrink.

“COME, LITTLE FISH. WALK THE BRIDGE. YOUR BODY IS COLD IN THE HOSPITAL. THE DOCTORS ARE LOSING HER. COME BACK TO THE WATER. I’LL KEEP YOU WARM.”

“No,” Wang Hui said, surprising herself. “No. I remember now. I was trying to get to my exam. I was going to be a doctor. I was crossing the bridge to get to the medical school on the other side.”

“AND NOW YOU WILL NEVER BE A DOCTOR,” the voice crooned. “UNLESS YOU CROSS. I CAN GIVE YOU KNOWLEDGE. I CAN GIVE YOU POWER. I HAVE SEEN THE INSIDE OF EVERY MIND THAT HAS EVER DROWNED IN ME.”

Old Ma grabbed Wang Hui’s wrist. “Don’t listen to him. That’s how he gets you. He offers you what you want most, and then he takes what you need most in return.”

Wang Hui looked at him. Her eyes were clearer now—more alive than they’d been since she’d gotten in the taxi. “What did he offer you? When you crossed?”

Old Ma was silent for a long moment. The river pulsed again. The face was closer now, pressing against the surface from beneath, like a child pressing its face against a window.

“He offered me a way out,” Old Ma finally said. “I was dying. Car accident. My wife was in the passenger seat. He appeared on the road and said he could save us both—if I drove for him. One night. That’s all he asked for. One night.”

“But it wasn’t one night.”

“It was one night. I drove for him for one night. But that night never ended. Every time I think I’ve reached morning, the sun doesn’t rise. Every time I think I’ve finished my shift, a new passenger appears. I’ve been driving that same night for thirty years.”

Wang Hui’s hand went to her chest. “And the woman in the photo? Your wife?”

“She’s out there,” Old Ma said fiercely. “Somewhere. She’s the one thing he’s never been able to touch. She’s the reason I keep driving. If I stop—if I give up—he gets her instead.”

The face in the water laughed. It was a terrible sound, like stones grinding together at the bottom of a deep well.

“YOU POOR FOOL. YOU STILL DON’T UNDERSTAND.”

The water parted. A hand emerged—pale, skeletal, the fingers too long. It reached toward the taxi. Toward the photograph in Old Ma’s hands.

“THAT WOMAN. THE ONE YOU LOVE. SHE WAS NEVER ALIVE.”

Old Ma’s face went slack. “What?”

“SHE DIED IN THE ACCIDENT. THE SAME ACCIDENT THAT KILLED YOU. I BROUGHT YOU BACK—BUT I COULD ONLY BRING ONE OF YOU. I CHOSE YOU. YOU WERE MORE USEFUL. THE IMAGE IN YOUR POCKET, THE MEMORY IN YOUR HEART—THOSE ARE MINE. FABRICATED. TO GIVE YOU REASON TO DRIVE.”

“That’s a lie,” Old Ma said, but his voice was hollow. “I remember her. I remember our wedding. I remember the way she laughed.”

“YOU REMEMBER WHAT I WANTED YOU TO REMEMBER.”

The hand reached the taxi window. The fingers left streaks on the glass—not water, but something darker. Something that smoked and hissed.

“YOU’VE DONE WELL, DRIVER. YOUR THIRTY YEARS ARE ALMOST UP. BRING ME THE GIRL. WALK HER ACROSS THE BRIDGE. AND I’LL LET YOU REST. I’LL LET YOU REMEMBER THE TRUTH.”

Old Ma’s hands were shaking now. The photograph trembled in his grip. Wang Hui watched him—saw the war playing out across his face. Thirty years of driving. Thirty years of believing he was working toward something. The foundation of his entire existence was cracking.

“Don’t listen to him,” Wang Hui said quietly. “He’s lying. He has to lie. It’s the only way he can win.”

“How do you know?” Old Ma’s voice was broken.

“Because I drowned,” Wang Hui said. “I was underwater for days. I learned things down there. One of the things I learned is that the river can only take what you give it freely. The man with the white teeth—he’s been trying to collect me for years, but I never gave myself to him. I kept walking. I kept looking for the way home.”

She reached out and touched Old Ma’s hand. Her fingers were cold, but her grip was steady.

“You never gave yourself to him either,” she said. “That’s why you’re still driving. That’s why you’re still you. He’s been trying to break you for thirty years, and he hasn’t succeeded yet.”

The face in the water roared. The river thrashed. The taxi shook violently, and somewhere in the distance, Old Ma heard the sound of the bridge beginning to crack.

“WALK THE BRIDGE,” the voice thundered. “WALK THE BRIDGE NOW, OR I’LL TAKE BOTH OF YOU.”

Old Ma looked at the bridge. The old stone structure. The one from Wang Hui’s memory. He’d seen it before—not in this life, but in the life before. The life he couldn’t quite remember.

“Wang Hui,” he said slowly. “When you were underwater. When you were walking. Did you see a woman? Dark hair. Kind eyes. She would have been walking the other way.”

Wang Hui’s face flickered. “I saw a lot of people down there. They’re all still walking.”

“Did you see her?”

She was quiet for a moment. Then: “There was a woman. She was wearing a green dress. The same color as the leaves on the trees by the river. She was walking upstream. Against the current. She told me to keep going. She said someone was coming to find me.”

Old Ma’s breath caught in his throat. The green dress. Their wedding. She’d worn white—but her bridesmaids had worn green. And the photo in his pocket—the one he’d carried for thirty years—the woman in it was wearing a green dress.

“She’s alive,” he whispered. “Somewhere down there. She’s still walking.”

The river surged again. The bridge groaned. Cracks spider-webbed across the stone.

“THE BRIDGE IS COLLAPSING,” the voice hissed. “WALK NOW. WALK NOW, OR YOU’LL NEVER CROSS.”

Old Ma’s eyes met Wang Hui’s. For a moment, they were just two people at the edge of an impossible river, both of them clinging to the same fragile thread of hope.

“Get out of the taxi,” Old Ma said.

Wang Hui’s hand tightened on the door handle. “What are you going to do?”

“I’m going to do what I should have done thirty years ago.” He reached for the ignition. The engine coughed to life—a sound like a heartbeat restarting. “I’m going to drive across the
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